July 31, 2011

Improbable

Air weighing heavy this summer-soft night
the frog choir stills
and the symphony of the dark ceases
as the cricket conductor drops his baton
they, too, are caught inside thoughts deep and mysterious

Star twinkles are muted
the moon, a shy slip of blush pink,
dips behind the clouds
wind slumbers and the world, this one nearby,
is strange in silence yet improbably beautiful

ktn © 2011








36 comments:

Brian Miller said...

nice...the frogs and the cricket make the night but when stilled yes all the more mysterious...thanks for the beautiful scene....

hedgewitch said...

Love this, Talon. It's a scene that could be straight out of my imagined hedgerow. The photos are, as always, every bit as magical as the poem. Thanks.

Hilary Melton-Butcher said...

Hi Talon .. good to see the moon appearing elsewhere .. we could have the gull baton down here - but I honestly think it's 24/7 gull conductor mode! Never stopping .. it's blissfully quiet when they do ..

Love the poem .. a shy slip of blush pink ..

Great - have a lovely week .. Hilary

Fireblossom said...

"the world, this one nearby,"

^^^ LOVE that!

Gautam said...

Are my eyes playing tricks on me or is the moon really resting on a pillow in this beautiful and lazy summer night?!! :)

Leenie said...

Warm, quiet and a whole lot of spooky!

Did the choir stop singing just to meditate? Or is the choir director giving those frogs a scolding in a teeny-tiny voice? Or can they detect a large, intimidating presence out there in the dark???

(I know, new graphic icon. I gave Mrs. Potato Head back to Hasbro and stole the silhouette of a neighborhood crow.)

sandy said...

Oh! I am there!
Talk about setting the mood!

Christine said...

Love it, we've had many a quiet night in our backyard, makes me think something is looming out there.

ayala said...

I love this, Talon. Magical.

Joan said...

This is lovely. I love opening your blog.. a fantastic big photo always surprises and thrills. Thank you Talon.

G-Man said...

Performed Perfectly by the Children of the Night.
Written Perfectly by Talon!

kkrige said...

oh, what an eerie quiet you paint. A calm before a storm? Frog serenades are a beautiful sound, as well as their accompanying cricket chorus, but when you are trying to sleep, sometimes that pause is perfect.

Margie said...

So lovely, Talon.
I love the night, there's so much magic in it, just like there is in your poem!
Thank you!

Margie :)

J Cosmo Newbery said...

I could hear them.

Lorraine said...

That is very beautiful, I can see it, I wish I had an inner camera ;)

Lynn said...

I love the thought of a symphony orchestra with crickets and can just see it. :) A fantasia like scene.

Granny Annie said...

I just can't get beyond picturing the tiny "cricket conductor" in his little tuxedo directing the cricket chorus:)

the walking man said...

I think I'd be getting ready for rain when the crickets and frogs went silent.

Sometimes, not always but sometimes even the 'hod goes strangely silent and it is good.

Belinda said...

You've transported me to this scene, as you so often do with your writing, Talon. You capture this silent summer night so beautifully.

"they, too, are caught inside thoughts deep and mysterious" -- what a gentle way to remind us that no, it isn't always about us.

Patricia said...

elegant

Nara Malone said...

A summer night I can come back and dip into when winter gets me down. Beautiful, Talon.

Anil P said...

So calming to read - the moon, a shy slip of blush pink.

The world is indeed improbably beautiful.

Snaggle Tooth said...

Awesome Black swallowtail on the cone flowers in the header! Your getting great macro pics. I tried more bees in the flowers recently, but they are invisible to my cam!

Love the line "...cricket conductor drops his baton" Always a strange moment when it stills unexpectedly- Maybe the frog ate the lead solo cricket!

Lorraine said...

Oh sweetie I want to see, I want to hear the world like you do, it's so lovely

Magyar said...

Soooo... good to know that you are back, K., with your "inglow."

An old one... fitting that sort of night.

dark night
playing chess with mosquitoes
I castle

As always. _m

JGH said...

There you go...perfectly setting the scene again. How do you do it!?

Linda said...

What an interesting shot of the moon. It is indeed but a slip. A silent summer night would be an unsettling event. I love the night sounds.

Louvregirl said...

Talon, You are so sweet. Having to take a break right now with a funeral coming up, setting up my father-in-law's affairs and tending to him, and my mother is coming for a visit next week. Wow.
lg
I am fine though; just incredibly busy right now.
:-)
I will get on to read blogs later.
Glad you are well and back!!
Oh. And I forgot that my daughter is starting high school next week!
(Another wow)
:-0 (blushing)
I told Lynn that I am 'afeared' that I will never get back on line...Things will calm down but I am not sure when right now.

TechnoBabe said...

Not just the air is heavy in your poem. You write of heavy stuff in such a sweet way.

Frieda said...

Mysteriously beautiful. That's a magical poem :)

trisha said...

what a poem! happy to have you back again. missed you a lot.

Count Sneaky said...

A little night music! Mozart would have been inspired by your poetry. By Stripey even...
My best.

Jannie Funster said...

AWEsomeness!!

I think the moon in his boudoir is a shy slip of a waif. :)

summer-soft, how lovely!

And the cricket with his conductor's baton! That is so wonderful, like the night you enjoyed when you wrote this.


Just a thought from me -- you maybe could axe "weighing." Maybe? Just my unsolicited 2 cents. You know I love you! And I always will.

xoxo

LauraX said...

I love this...such an elegant poem and an amazing photo for inspiration. I'm so glad I stopped by to read this:-)

Louvregirl said...

"and the world, this one nearby;" I especially like this line, Talon. Hope that your summer is 'rockin.' I am looking forward to the U.S. Open. :-)

Maxine Beneba Clarke said...

I like the words 'the world / this one near by. So full of mystery and possiblity.