You see the music ...
you tell me notes drift past
as if written in amethyst smoke
with a calligrapher’s fine hand
as you sit at the piano
creating worlds I want to inhabit
You hear the music ...
the sound of the ocean trapped in a seashell
the cry of a loon on a mist lake
the tinkle of ice in crystal goblets
the giggle of a child
the weeping of a heart broken
the sigh of wind through summer leaves
you tell me to listen
and I do
do you hear it? you ask
I do ... I do ...
You taste the music ...
you tell me it’s as layered as an onion
pungent and raw
until you work your magic and it softens
becoming caramelized and pliant
like the onions you devour with your steak ...
you call the meal I prepare a symphony
I am flattered
and glow with the beauty of creation
You play the music like a man possessed ...
you tell me this is the only time
you feel liberated and unfettered
from the banality of day to day
and I don’t feel slighted
because we all hanker for a soul’s pure freedom
You tell me the notes are demanding
and you, their instrument, must do their bidding
until the music stretches the ordinary
as tightly as you stretch the strings of your battered
Gibson
until the notes become something else...
something you lay claim to
23 comments:
I never understood mathematics or was able to learn to play music, yet I came to know the mathematical formulas of the music. Do you hear it equations of tonality that liberate the soul to rise above the ever life pounding fray? If bt for a few moment through these simple lines of verse I was liberated by his mathematics of music. Sweet Freedom.
Thank you Talon for reminding me in words why I love the mathematics of music. The formula of my early liberation.
ah this is beautiful...smiling big...to hear the sweet music in the world around us...ha..and the appreciation of the symphony dinner...that is sweet music surely....very cool write...
This is beautiful. I love the imagery.
Wow, this is a masterpiece Talon, it truly is. Incredible!
I often think the songs demand me to write them, n once they exist, they are solid as rock, n have a life of their own. This reminded me...
I so envy the passion of the musician...and the poet:)
Oh - so beautiful. "written in amethyst smoke..."
Love the photo of your kitty (Stripey, I think) contemplating the snow.
This is perfection!
Absolutely gorgeous!!!!!!!!
Hi Talon - I love this .. I've become so interested in both maths and music and their combination ... poetry too ties ... music ties the words together ... words express the music .. we weave our talents together ..
Beautiful poem .. cheers Hilary
she writes
her mind's music
meant through these heartful words
in lines of live's wonder and glee
love's care
__K.,
__A minimal Cinquain echo; mind's
music... may simply be words that illuminate ones overiding intent to offer care.
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It is so much music I had to read it aloud several times.
This is the day we were given news that our youngest daughter had been born - at age 5 after watching a movie she sat down at the grand piano and played the Flight of the Bumble BEE a friend showed her how to put the base chords in the next day...As a teen she gave up playing...I hope she will come back. Watching her was like watching someone at prayer.
I have dyscalcula - numbers mean just about nothing to me - but I could not go on in music - makes me sad - and I really do not write poetry...oh that old math
Absolutely breathtaking with all your beautiful words woven together. Very touching.
You are right Talon, I do love this poem. Beautiful.
This poem speaks to me, though I sometimes wish I could hear what some people do when listening to some music (such as classical). Music was, and to some extent still is, one of the things that keeps me sane.
Talon Dear....
It takes one to know one.
Tres bien!!
if only the backgound of life was music how much happier we would be lovely writing as always
A wonderful poem. I love the way your words and images speak the refrains and bars to the music in every part of life. It flows, and makes a lover of music feel as if they can use all kinds and genres to relate to life situations. Even while peeling onions. :)
This is gorgeous..I love the ocean trapped in a seashell...the music being like a layered onion ..and the liberation of it all. I love this!
Absolutely spellbinding!
All the senses are involved here-- the second stanza is delightfully auditory--the poem is your instrument, and like a master musician, you have us listening, spellbound.
This is a splendid poem... From the amethyst smoke to the pungent onion you lay claim to our senses and to our hearts...
oh Talon
this is so beautiful
I've been listening to nature welcoming spring in song/ you paint a beautiful song with your words.
there have to be a few tears (with onions)
~L
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